Berean fake ad - line art

[535comix]

This is the line art for a fake ad for 'Berean Shoe Company', a fictional company i made up. the ad will appear in 'Kickflip', a new comic I'm working on. I tried to slip in some references to Acts 17:11 that some may pick up on , some may not. (Such as 'Saul Caldpaul' - Saul called Paul....as well as the company motto ' Search Daily' - because the Bereans searched the scriptures daily...blah blah blah anyway). The final piece will have color. I used photo references from a Thrasher magazine.


http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk209/theamishfury/bereanfullpagesmall.jpg

[Scarn]

sweet action ;]
I'm all for the street-art font, but I'm having difficulty reading it. Since it's for an in-comic ad it probably doesn't matter.